Hidden Paradise Stables Evaluations #1

[Lin Ryder]

Your name: Lin Ryder
Barn name: Hidden Paradise Stables: Stockhorses
Barn URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/
Horse name: Velvet Playboy Olena
Category: Show Horse
Horse URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/velvet.html
Has this horse applied before? No

Your name: Lin Ryder
Barn name: Hidden Paradise Stables: Stockhorses
Barn URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/
Horse name: Ima Freckles Gun
Category: Show Horse
Horse URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/gun.html
Has this horse applied before? No

Your name: Lin Ryder
Barn name: Hidden Paradise Stables: Stockhorses
Barn URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/
Horse name: Morning War Spots
Category: Show Horse
Horse URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/spots.html
Has this horse applied before? No

Your name: Lin Ryder
Barn name: Hidden Paradise Stables: Stockhorses
Barn URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/
Horse name: HPS Sue McCue
Category: Show Horse
Horse URL: celticlover.fyrefly.org/all-sim/hpstock/sue.html
Has this horse applied before? No

[Kalla Hawk]

Lin,
These horses scored VERY low, and I hate giving out such awful scores, but honestly, this is why I took the time to write all those hints & criteria out in the main Evaluation post. Please read the Evaluation post to see what it is I am looking for in the applicants, and how to get scored higher. Some of these things I have mentioned below could have easily been avoided, and your horses would've achieved really high scores, if you waited a bit longer (more show records) or spent a little bit more time on their pages (add some details & information) or double-check your typing, like in the case of naming the Appaloosa Horse Club an 'association'. Ooops.


Velvet Playboy Olena
Name (10/10)
Basic Stats Realism (10/10)
Color & Pattern Realism (10/10)
Written Description (1/10)
ASApHC Activity (5/10)
Completed Pedigree (10/10)
Origin/History (0/10)
Breeding Information (5/10)
Active Show Horse, Show Record (10/20)
= Final Score: 61%
Lost points because: not titled in the ASApHC, not a very impressive show record at this time, has only one sentence as his write-up, no stud information other than a mention that he is a stud, no origin/history information at all.




Ima Freckles Gun
Name (10/10)
Basic Stats Realism (10/10)
Color & Pattern Realism (10/10)
Written Description (0/10)
ASApHC Activity (0/10)
Completed Pedigree (10/10)
Origin/History (10/10)
Breeding Information (0/10)
Active Show Horse, Show Record (5/20)
= Final Score: 55%
Lost points because: not titled in the ASApHC, not a very impressive show record at this time, there is no write-up/description, no brood/breeding information other than a title for the foal records, and the ASApHC is named wrong on the show records ('Club' not 'Association').





Morning War Spots
Name (10/10)
Basic Stats Realism (10/10)
Color & Pattern Realism (10/10)
Written Description (1/10)
ASApHC Activity (0/10)
Completed Pedigree (10/10)
Origin/History (0/10)
Breeding Information (0/10)
Active Show Horse, Show Record (0/20)
= Final Score: 41% (FAIL)
Lost points because: not titled in the ASApHC, not a very impressive show record at this time, there is only one sentence for a write-up/description, no brood/breeding information other than a title for the foal records, you have listed her as a 'Champion' with the ASWCHA with only 30 points (Champion title requires 100+ points), and the ASApHC is named wrong on the show records ('Club' not 'Association').

HPS Sue McCue
Name (10/10)
Basic Stats Realism (10/10)
Color & Pattern Realism (10/10)
Written Description (0/10)
ASApHC Activity (0/10)
Completed Pedigree (10/10)
Origin/History (0/10)
Breeding Information (0/10)
Active Show Horse, Show Record (1/20)
= Final Score: 41% (FAIL)
Lost points because: not titled in the ASApHC, she barely has any show records, her write-up/description says 'text blurb', no brood/breeding information other than a title that says "Offspring", and the ASApHC is named wrong on the show records ('Club' not 'Association').